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Pancake Day 4: Super Splash Sisters: Scene 1
Story by Black Opera
Posted 3/1/22     604 views
Hello UMD, it's playtime.
If you've been following my updates you know I announced a new entry to my Pancake Day series last week, and to not a huge surprise, I'm premiering it on Pancake Day itself.
It starts with a notable change, inspired by an old horror movie review book. It covered the Friday the 13th Films, and had a bit on the one with an impostor Jason, and noted how this was an intriguing idea, but ended up as a missed opportunity. This did give me the idea for a plot with a copycat of Princess Porcelain. This has allowed me to do a few things, like introduce some new messy substances, without going out of character for Porcelain, and let me pay homage to a few old scenes, like this first one that pays homage to the first scene I ever wrote back in Pancake Day 1, Scene 1.
Overall this has been a fun one to write, hope you have fun reading it as well.

Scene 1:

The camera shows us an overview of a large carnival, featuring many large tents and attractions, and many large fairground rides. A haunting carousel organ melody is heard as the camera cuts around different scenes, showing people enjoying themselves, watching shows, eating candy floss and riding the old time wooden roller coaster. The music grows louder and takes a more sinister tone, before halting as the screen temporarily fades to black.

The camera cuts to a woman in her early thirties, strapped to an ornate wooden chair. She is tall and skinny with fair skin, and has long brunette hair. She is wearing a dark purple blouse, and a business like knee length black pencil skirt, and a pair of black ankle boots. Two metal bands are securing her wrists to the arms of the chair, and a further 5 thick black leather straps are secured by padlocks around her torso.
As the camera zooms out we see she is on the edge of a large turntable about 9 metres across. On the turntable we also see a lot of wooden cut outs of fantasy creatures like dragons and fairies. Before we can take in too much we're interrupted by the sound of footsteps.

??????: Hello Scarlett. It's time to play.

The camera cuts to a doorway where we see 3 figures walk through. Taking the lead is a tall, long haired, blonde lady, wearing a white lace corset, with white jewel embellishments and a white lace petticoat style skirt that reaches to the top of her thighs. Below that we see she is wearing a white pair of lace top stockings and suspenders, that lead down to an elegant pair of white knee high boots with a 4 inch stiletto heel. Looking up we see her face is concealed by a elegant looking Venetian style opera mask. Behind her we see she is flanked by two other women, both brunette, and dressed in a similar fashion, only ones outfit is emerald green, the others is royal blue.

Scarlett: Hey! Can you help me?!.
???????: What? Now we've captured you. I don't think so.
Scarlett: Who are you three?
??????: You can call me Crystal, and my besties here are Jade and Sapphire.
Jade and Sapphire: Hi.
Scarlett: What are you doing?
Crystal: Well Scarlett, for too long you've been suppressing the people of Port Orrich with your rules and regulations. Stopping so many of us having fun, and trying to force us on to your own narrow path.
Scarlett: What are you talking about?
Jade: Can we punish her now Crystal?
Crystal: Why not. You two should have your fun.

Jade and Sapphire step towards Scarlett. We see both are holding large disposable paper bowls. The camera cuts to Scarlett's face as one of the bowls is forcibly pushed into first her face, and then rubbed all over her head, covering most of it in a thick, pale yellow sauce. As the first bowl is taken away a second is immediately shoved in Scarlett's face, not even giving her a chance to recover from the first, this time finishing the job, leaving her head covered in a thick yellow sauce.

Scarlett: What is that stuff?
Sapphire: Salad Cream, I'm surprised you don't recognize it.
Crystal: In fact if you look up you'll find your knowledge of condiments will come in very useful.

The camera cuts to a shot showing what's above Scarlett. Hanging above her are 5 large plastic sweet-shop jars with screw on lids hanging from the bottom of them, each one contains a brightly colored sauce or liquid.

Crystal: In a minute my friend Jade is going to pull that lever on the wall over there. You'll be glad to know that will free your hands. You'll find the keys to the 5 padlocks for the straps above you in the jars. I'd search quickly if were you. The big carousel your on will also be turning. When you reach the end of your journey that curtain over there will open, and the whole carnival will see you as the contents of that gunge tank over there being dumped over you.

We see Scarlett struggle to look around, before the camera cuts to a large 2 foot by 2 foot cube, filled with a bright red liquid with a few yellow specks in it.

Scarlett: What is that?
Jade: Hot Sauce.
Scarlett: What?
Crystal: Well if you don't want to get covered in it you'd better work quickly. Have fun.

With that we see Crystal give a nod. The camera cuts to a shot of the lever as Jade pulls it, and then to Sapphire as she turns over an hour glass on a table, before she walks back out the door with the other two.
The camera cuts to Scarlett as the metal bands around her wrists become free. She wipes the salad cream off her face, and fruitlessly pulls at the leather straps as the turntable starts to slowly turn. Realizing she has no other choice she stretches her arms up above her. The camera cuts to a view looking up at the jars as Scarlett grabs one with her left hand and unscrews the jar with her right. It takes a few turns before the lid, and the thick white mayonnaise all falls down towards the camera. The camera cuts to a shot of Scarlett, just lowering her face as the mayonnaise falls down on her head, and starts dripping down her hair, and on to her body. Scarlett looks around, and goes through the mayonnaise with her hands until she finds a key in her hair. She tries the keys in the padlocks, until the third one she tries snaps open. She reaches up to the next jar, and starts to unscrew. The camera cuts to Scarlett's face as a large amount of rich red ketchup falls on to her face, leaving it coated as she gasps and wipes her eyes. The camera cuts to the hour glass where we can see just under half the sand has fallen down. The camera then cuts back to Scarlett as she retrieves the key from her lap, and tries unlocking the padlocks until the fourth one snaps open.
The camera cuts to a overview shot of the twisted turntable, where we see Scarlett edging ever closer to the tank containing the hot sauce. The camera cuts back to Scarlett as the contents of a large jar of brown sauce falls on top of her, this time the jar is a little further forward so much of it falls on her torso. As she searches for the key the camera cuts to the hourglass, that now shows about 40 percent of the time is left. The camera cuts back to one of the padlocks as it's unlocked, the it cuts to a close up of Scarlett's condiment covered face looking intently up for several seconds, before a large amount of bright yellow mustard falls down on her face, leaving a new yellow layer to add to the mess coating her face and saturating her hair. The camera zooms out slowly as Scarlett wipes her eyes, and then searches around for the key, checking her lap, and in her hair. She spends almost 30 seconds searching around, starting to panic before she glances down. The camera cuts to a shot looking down at the ground, where we see the key has fallen down by her right foot. The camera cuts to a shot of Scarlett struggling against the bonds of the leather bands, until by pushing on the chairs arm with her left hand she gets enough leverage to reach down and just reach the key. As she unlocks the next padlock the camera cuts to the hourglass, and we see the time has nearly run out.
The camera cuts back to Scarlett as she reaches up to unscrew the last jar. A few seconds later a large splodge of BBQ sauce falls down on Scarlett, and the camera cuts back to the hourglass as the time runs out.
The camera cuts to a shot of a crowd of people walking up and down the midway of a carnival. Suddenly a load siren blares out causing people to look around confused. The camera pans around until we see a curtain opening, revealing Scarlett still trapped on the chair. She lets out a scream of terror as the tank above her opens, causing a huge cascade of bright red hot sauce to fall down on her, obscuring her from view for several seconds, until the cascade ceases, revealing Scarlett letting out a scream, completely covered from head to toe in the bright red hot sauce as the crowd looks on.
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