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"Dialogue/Script in a scene?"
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Scripting and setup are big factors for me. I've written dozens of scripts over the years in that interest.
But, yeah, execution is important and scripts can be tough to pull off. But, I guess I would take so-so acting over feeding lines directly to a model.
But, yeah, execution is important and scripts can be tough to pull off. But, I guess I would take so-so acting over feeding lines directly to a model.
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
JoeYoung2007 said: You should check out her YCDTOTV comics (I believe you can find them via her UMD profile). She knows how to write dialogue that's genuinely funny, while the skits and comics are incredibly effective WAM-related material.
JY
JY
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Depends. Sometimes seeing beautiful women covered in messiness is all I'm looking for. In fact usually I purchase scenes just for the imagery. I don't particularly care if there is much talking at all.
But my custom orders usually has some elaborate plot idea, with a detailed script and lots of dialogue. Performance and speaking my dialogue believably is really important when it comes to my custom videos.
But my custom orders usually has some elaborate plot idea, with a detailed script and lots of dialogue. Performance and speaking my dialogue believably is really important when it comes to my custom videos.
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
RobbyWLP said: Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Is that like Humble.....Pie? (singing 30 days in the hole.....)
As long as it's for a... 'Natural Born Woman'
11/17/25, 2:37pm: No-bump reply
KelseyRose said:
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
Honestly I'm more into just seeing the mess happen. I don't need a big set up or a trivia contest or some script leading up to a mess. I don't mind talking, but I'd rather it just be them talking about enjoying the mess (or sometimes not enjoying it) as they're being slimed. Bottom line, I'm watching for the WAM, and I'm probably going to fast forward through anything that isn't WAM.
#DontLookUp
GungedHairFan said: Honestly I'm more into just seeing the mess happen. I don't need a big set up or a trivia contest or some script leading up to a mess. I don't mind talking, but I'd rather it just be them talking about enjoying the mess (or sometimes not enjoying it) as they're being slimed. Bottom line, I'm watching for the WAM, and I'm probably going to fast forward through anything that isn't WAM.
This is cool. I'm like the exact opposite, in that the script/setup are critical for my enjoyment, and I sometimes have fast fowarded through messy parts lol, but it's fun to see people who feel the opposite way I do and yet we enjoy the same thing (for the most part)
May I ask, out of curiosity, what show(s) or video(s) got you into wam? And did they play a huge part in developing your tastes? Or was it more of an aesthetic/visceral reaction to it that got you into it? I'm always interested in hearing how everyone's different tastes developed.
For me, I grew up watching Nickelodeon shows where the mess was very much scripted and setup as a punishment/consequence, so for me, I'm always wanting it to be a "payoff" sort of if that makes sense. Even if it's a super simple or short setup, I still want there to be some sort of setup and payoff. I think that's why I also enjoy gameshow/trivia/quiz oriented videos, as even though there isn't a "scripted setup", there is still that consequence and payoff element
GungedHairFan said: Honestly I'm more into just seeing the mess happen. I don't need a big set up or a trivia contest or some script leading up to a mess. I don't mind talking, but I'd rather it just be them talking about enjoying the mess (or sometimes not enjoying it) as they're being slimed. Bottom line, I'm watching for the WAM, and I'm probably going to fast forward through anything that isn't WAM.
To quote the great Jackie Freeborn "people don't realize the brain is the biggest eroticist zone"
bizopp713 said:
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
KelseyRose said:
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
This script is just wonderful. Absolutely perfect. It really ticks every box for me. Great work and thanks for sharing
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KelseyRose said:
This is cool. I'm like the exact opposite, in that the script/setup are critical for my enjoyment, and I sometimes have fast fowarded through messy parts lol, but it's fun to see people who feel the opposite way I do and yet we enjoy the same thing (for the most part)
May I ask, out of curiosity, what show(s) or video(s) got you into wam? And did they play a huge part in developing your tastes? Or was it more of an aesthetic/visceral reaction to it that got you into it? I'm always interested in hearing how everyone's different tastes developed.
For me, I grew up watching Nickelodeon shows where the mess was very much scripted and setup as a punishment/consequence, so for me, I'm always wanting it to be a "payoff" sort of if that makes sense. Even if it's a super simple or short setup, I still want there to be some sort of setup and payoff. I think that's why I also enjoy gameshow/trivia/quiz oriented videos, as even though there isn't a "scripted setup", there is still that consequence and payoff element
GungedHairFan said: Honestly I'm more into just seeing the mess happen. I don't need a big set up or a trivia contest or some script leading up to a mess. I don't mind talking, but I'd rather it just be them talking about enjoying the mess (or sometimes not enjoying it) as they're being slimed. Bottom line, I'm watching for the WAM, and I'm probably going to fast forward through anything that isn't WAM.
This is cool. I'm like the exact opposite, in that the script/setup are critical for my enjoyment, and I sometimes have fast fowarded through messy parts lol, but it's fun to see people who feel the opposite way I do and yet we enjoy the same thing (for the most part)
May I ask, out of curiosity, what show(s) or video(s) got you into wam? And did they play a huge part in developing your tastes? Or was it more of an aesthetic/visceral reaction to it that got you into it? I'm always interested in hearing how everyone's different tastes developed.
For me, I grew up watching Nickelodeon shows where the mess was very much scripted and setup as a punishment/consequence, so for me, I'm always wanting it to be a "payoff" sort of if that makes sense. Even if it's a super simple or short setup, I still want there to be some sort of setup and payoff. I think that's why I also enjoy gameshow/trivia/quiz oriented videos, as even though there isn't a "scripted setup", there is still that consequence and payoff element
It was mostly Nickelodeon stuff. I really remember Figure it Out, and always having a feeling of excitement in the possibility of seeing any of the girls getting slimed. Sometimes they'd have stuff in commercials. Also various scenes in movies/shows with actresses in pools or the shower. I also remember stumbling across a picture of Sissy Spacek in the prom scene from Carrie, and thinking "I have to see this movie..." and it was on TV one night, and I couldn't wait to see that part from the picture. Sports Illustrated swimsuit edition also had wet haired girls that excited me. Then the internet came along and I discovered it was actually a thing and was able to get way more out of it.
#DontLookUp
GungedHairFan said: Honestly I'm more into just seeing the mess happen. I don't need a big set up or a trivia contest or some script leading up to a mess. I don't mind talking, but I'd rather it just be them talking about enjoying the mess (or sometimes not enjoying it) as they're being slimed. Bottom line, I'm watching for the WAM, and I'm probably going to fast forward through anything that isn't WAM.
I could understand just wanting to see girls shut up and take it.
Slime...more slime!!!!!
bizopp713 said:
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
KelseyRose said:
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
That..script...was...............AWESOME!!! I legit laughed out loud at some parts. Honestly, very well done. I really like it.
Slime...more slime!!!!!
11/17/25, 2:37pm: No-bump reply
The Man and The Wife said:
That..script...was...............AWESOME!!! I legit laughed out loud at some parts. Honestly, very well done. I really like it.
bizopp713 said:
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
KelseyRose said:
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
That..script...was...............AWESOME!!! I legit laughed out loud at some parts. Honestly, very well done. I really like it.
Sounds to me like it needs to happen.
bizopp713 said:
Sounds to me like it needs to happen.
The Man and The Wife said:
That..script...was...............AWESOME!!! I legit laughed out loud at some parts. Honestly, very well done. I really like it.
bizopp713 said:
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
KelseyRose said:
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
bizopp713 said:
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
KelseyRose said:
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Pie Romaine-y Yak said:
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
JoeYoung2007 said:
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
...So, i usually like minimal dialogue if possible.
However, there are some talented writers around here, one of them very much being Kelsey Rose.
Tell me more! Where can we find Kelsey Rose's scripting? Has it been used by Slimed Models or another producer?
Whoa just seeing this!!
You can find most of my YCDTOTV comics here; https://www.deviantart.com/kelseyrosesred
And I have some other little pieces of fan-fiction and slime-art elsewhere too...
Wow. This is going to give her a big head. She won't be able to fit that thing through the door.
Sounds like someone should find a way to humble me...perhaps in one of his YCDTOTV scripts...
Humbling achieved with the help of The Wife and Lilly.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1In0lznmqoywTLGQLqxtZ2WszSyJ8zaeeGfSVzfCCnp0/edit
That..script...was...............AWESOME!!! I legit laughed out loud at some parts. Honestly, very well done. I really like it.
Sounds to me like it needs to happen.
I agree! ...And with Ellie playing the role of Kelsey!
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