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Pancake Day 3: Splat to reality: Scenes 43 + 44 + 45
Story by Black Operax
Posted 2/21/22     235 views
Hi, I'm just doing a quick update, as for those that remember my work at it's old location will know, this is the final part of my original Pancake Day trilogy. You might now be expecting to move towards uploading another one of my old series. Well not quite, you see a few months ago I started writing the fourth entry to my Pancake Day series, so I'll by starting to upload that here, for the first time anywhere soon. It's been a fun one to write so hope you enjoy it when it comes out. For now it's time to update yourself on the end of the third entry in preparation.

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Scene 43:

The camera cuts to a shot of an electronic sliding door. It slides open partially and we see Porcelain quickly squeeze through the gap, where she quickly touches something on the screen on her tablet, causing it to slide shut again. Porcelain pauses to catch her breath, as a loud knocking, and shouting are heard from the other side of the door.

Kristy: Let me in! (bang, bang, bang,) You can't stay in there forever.
Porcelain: I don't intend to. I just need to set up a few things. This was supposed to be Cleo's playroom, but I think it will do for you.

The camera cuts to an overview of the room. It's a large room, with the walls painted in pastel colors, with images of mermaids, clowns, unicorns and other iconography suitable for a nursery. At various points around the edge of the room are various large boxes, painted brightly, with a question mark on the side. Of most interest though is a large pool of thick yellow custard taking almost the entire floor of the room, apart from the ledge where Porcelain came in, and a higher up balcony, almost on the opposite side of the room. Across the large pool there is a meandering path of stepping stones, that get higher as they go along, forming a set of elaborate steps up to the balcony. Porcelain carefully traverses every stone, until she reaches the balcony. She then turns on and presses the screen of her tablet a few times. In response several devices around the room activate. Several of the stepping stones start to rotate like a large turntable, fountains of custard spray up from the pool at some points, and in others custard starts to flow down from the ceiling forming a barrier between the stepping stones. A wry smile on her face Porcelain presses her tablet one last time, causing the door she entered through to slide open again. Kristy bursts strait through the door, just stopping herself as she spots the pool of custard in front of her.

Porcelain: Hello Kristy. It's playtime. It's not very often I say that to someone a second time, but you are proving to be quite the thorn in my side.
Kristy: Well someone has to deal with you.
Porcelain: Still hoping to make the front pages are you?
Kristy: I couldn't care less about that. I just want you dealt with for good.

The camera cuts to an overview of the room. Before Porcelain can reply another voice is heard over the tannoy system.

Athena: Kristy. It's OK, there's no need to put yourself in danger. We've already phoned the authorities on Katy's phone, and they're on their way. Porcelain's got to head strait to the jetty or she won't escape in time.
Kristy: What? Why would you want me to let her escape?
Athena: What with the way Katy, Mel treated us like cattle can you really hold it against her. Maybe it is time we stopped trying to conform to their ways and expressed our individuality more.
Porcelain: Not the first time I've saved you from a group of repressors is it Athena?
Kristy: I can't say I blame you for going after them, and I don't doubt you've taken down some nasty people Porcelain. I'm sure in your twisted mind your doing everything for the greater good. What I can't let go though is the indiscrimination of your crusades. For every bad person you've taken down there must be numerous people who suffered along the way, who didn't deserve what you gave them. If I don't stop you, you'll keep making innocent people suffer.
Athena: Wait a min.

The camera cuts to Porcelain tapping the screen on her tablet as Athena is cut off.

Porcelain: Well it would have been a bit anticlimactic if we'd just settled our differences. Trouble is though, as much as I've developed a respect for you, and your no nonsense attitude Kristy, I'm afraid your act first, think later attitude has cost you. Without my friends I can't get Cleo's playroom fully functional, but it's definitely enough to slow you down while I make my escape. Shame, you know under different circumstances we could have been friends, but it seems I must bid you farewell.
Kristy: Wait!

The camera cuts to a shot of Porcelain leaving through the back of the room, then cuts back to a shot looking down at Kristy on the other side of the custard pool. She steps out to the first stepping stone, then quickly to the second, and through several upward jets of custard to the third. The camera cuts to a close up of her as she lands on the third stone, that is spinning around. She stumbles and looses her balance, causing her to trip. Her arms flail in the air as she stumbles off the side of the stone, and plunges down splashing under the surface off the custard. The camera cuts to the surface of the custard as Kristy remerges wiping her eyes, as she wades back to the side of the pool, now covered in a thick layer of custard, that continues to slowly drip down her. At the side she grabs a handle located on the edge to pull herself out the pool. She steps back to the stones again, stepping out to the first, and second again. This time she pauses to compose herself, before leaping through the custard jets on to the third stone. She lands, bending her knees to stabilize herself. She spins around on the stone, but manages to keep her footing. She looks down, spinning around several times before jumping off the third stone, and steadying herself as she lands on the fourth. She has to step through a waterfall of custard raining down from the ceiling to reach the fifth. As she steps on to the sixth the camera cuts to her feet as the sixth stone moves under her feet, as it becomes apparent it's merely floating on the custard, and is not stably attached to anything. The camera cuts to Kristy as she quickly reacts by throwing herself at the seventh stone. It's a rough belly flop on to the stone as a landing, but she keeps hold of it and manages to scramble her way on to it, and stand up again. She pauses to catch her breath as she regards the next two stones. They are both spinning in opposite directions, and to make things more difficult there's a waterfall of custard cascading down from the ceiling, creating a barrier between the two stones. She carefully jumps on to the eighth stone, keeping her footing as she crouches down to stabilize herself as she spins around. She spins around several times, before leaping through the custard waterfall and landing on the ninth stone, she hits it at too much speed though and can't stabilize herself, instead stumbling towards the edge of the stone, at the last second she takes a leap towards the tenth stone, and just makes it on to that, where she drops to her knees to slow herself down. She gets up, favoring her left leg slightly, to look at the last three stones. They all get gradually higher, leading to the ledge where Porcelain escaped from. Each pair of stones has either a set of fountains spraying custard up, or a waterfall raining custard down. With a deep breath she leaps on to the first, then the second, ignoring as best she can all the custard now coating her, then finally on to the third stone, and then the ledge, where she lands by rolling to the ground, she pauses to wipe her eyes before charging through the door, after Porcelain.

Scene 44:

The camera cuts to a shot of a familiar looking room, baring a strong resemblance to the safe room Kristy found herself in after her game earlier. The camera cuts to an entrance door as Kristy comes running through. It looks like she's going to run strait through, barely breaking stride as she grabs a towel off the bed, but she suddenly stops as she spots something on the desk. The camera cuts to a shot of her, picking up Porcelain's tablet off the desk. We see the back of Porcelain's tablet as Kristy tries touching it, and a wry smile comes to her face, as she puts it down on the bed and continues on her way. The camera cuts to show the tablet screen. On it is a large padlock logo, and underneath in large letters it says "Locked by Mess Investigation 5."

Scene 45:

The camera cuts to another familiar room. This time it's the one Amy's game took place in earlier. Most notable is the large pool of green slime taking up much of the room, with a ladder on one side leading up to the platform where Amy's game took, and even further up to another passage. As the camera pans around it focuses on another door at ground level. It's currently sealed shut, but we see Porcelain kneeling next to it. She has taken a panel off the wall, which has revealed a previously hidden set of wires and switches. She is currently trying to rearranges the wires to make the door open. The camera cuts to a shot looking back over her shoulder, and we see Kristy carefully creeping up behind her. A creak is heard, causing Porcelain to glance over her shoulder. Reacting quickly Porcelain spins round, grabbing a can of chlorofoam, and spraying a deluge of foam in Kristy's direction. The camera cuts to a shot showing a white wall of foam where Kristy stands, but she is still standing. The camera cuts to a shot from behind Kristy, and it shows her holding up a towel to shield herself from the chlorofoam. She darts forwards with the towel, trying to cover Porcelain with her own chlorofoam. This obscures her view though, so she fails to dodge a stiletto heel kicking sharply into her leg. As Kristy stumbles Porcelain continues to kick at her leg, until she drops to the floor. Porcelain makes a dash towards the slime pool, dropping in and scooting around the edge where the slime comes up to just above her knees, until she reaches the ladder, and starts to climb up it. The camera cuts to Kristy as she gets up, shaking her now injured leg, before running after Porcelain again, jumping strait in to the slime pool, and charging across it, although this doesn't prove to be much faster, as the slime comes all the way up to her chest in the center.
The camera cuts to the higher platform where we see Porcelain grab hold of some of the steel balls used in Amy's game earlier. She throws several of them down at Kristy on the ladder. The camera cuts to Kristy, as she leans back from the ladder, meaning several of the balls strike her body, but she avoids a more dangerous strike to the head. She reacts by scrambling up the ladder as fast as she can, but in her haste is unable to avoid a strike to the face by one of Porcelain's feet. This stuns Kristy, and a second blow causes her to loose her grip with her left hand, causing her to swing to one side, just holding on with her right hand. Sensing blood Porcelain climbs from the platform to the ladder, and strikes her foot directly down on Kristy. Just as she strikes for a second time Kristy reaches out, grabbing a bar under the platform, letting her swing out the way. With lightning quick reflexes she wraps her legs around Porcelain as she stomps down, using her own momentum to make her miss her step by even more. The camera cuts to a long shot as Porcelain lets out a scream as she looses her footing, and falls from the ladder. The camera then cuts to a shot of Porcelain's face, as she continues to scream as she falls to the slime pit below. The camera cuts to the surface of the slime pit, as Porcelain hits it with a splash and slowly sinks beneath the surface. The camera cuts to Kristy as she hauls herself up to the top of the ladder, where she looks down on the slime pool below.

Kristy: Show's over bitch.

The camera zooms out so it's looking down on Kristy at the top of the ladder and the slime pool. The camera cuts to a shot off the outside of the mansion where a swat team is breaking down the front gate. It cuts to another shot of a nearby jetty where Porcelain's friends are surrounded by another group of armed personnel, blocking their passage to their escape boat, then the camera cuts back to the initial room, and zooms in to the surface of the slime pool. It lingers there for several seconds, the surface staying still. Suddenly Porcelain's hand bursts out of the surface of the pool, and lunges towards the camera.

Roll Closing Credits.
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cabbie313:
2/25/22
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It's been really fun to read all of this! I only got part way through the second film before the WAM Library shut down way back when. I'm excited to see what you come up with for day 4!
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