my first story. inspired by "a wedding day detour" by john smith (I'd include a link to that one but I'm not sure how). let me know what you think.


"so we need to ask a little favor of all of you" said the maid of honor Lucy to us.
Just moments ago before the reception was supposed to start, Lucy had gone up to grab the microphone and asked all the girls attending to meet her outside. We were all a little confused of course, none of us wanting to cause a commotion got up and left. It was my daughter Charlotte's wedding day and she had chosen to marry a boy named Jacob, who I had come to like as he was one of the boys Charlotte had brought home that didn't call me a MILF and try to hit on me too. I will admit having only given birth to Charlotte when I was 20 I did seem young to be the mother of someone just out of college, additionally I did keep in good shape and had a tight body and nice curly blonde hair, but the whole experience did turn me off of many of her male friends. But Jacob wasn't like that and was a hard worker who, at only 23 like my daughter, had managed to take over his father's formerly failing soap company and bring it up to making over 2 million a year in profits. He was also kind enough to pay for the whole wedding including food, catering and location which was on a small hill next to a gorgeous lake. Everything seemed to be going so well, so naturally we were all curious what was up.

"You see, during preparations the bride's make up turned out to have been expired so I'm afraid she doesn't quite look as good as she would like to."
a bunch of people began talking and saying things like "oh that's bad"
Lucy waited for us to stop talking before continuing. "and as I'm sure you all know, it tradition that the bride should be the prettiest person at her wedding". We all nodded in agreement.
"so we think it is necessary that we mess all of us up in solidarity with her" said Anna one of the other bridesmaids. She was a cute Asian girl nice short hair and big brown eyes. right now we could see a twinkle in them as if she was begging us to agree.
"Well what do you want us to do?" asked a woman in the back named Linda Davidson. She was about 6 ft tall and had long red hair which typically ran down to her elbows although today she had it in a large bun. She had been an associate of Jacob's dad working as a fashion designer and today with Jacob who she had formed a close friendship with despite being 15 years older than him at 38. She was also very rich which was especially apparent from her outfit which consisted of a blue formal short sleeved dress that went down to her heels, two beautiful closed toe high heel shoes, long elbow length opera gloves, a beautiful silk dark blue shawl and a diamond necklace with a shimmering tiara. Everyone of course envied her.

"well you see that dock over there?" said Anna pointing to a short board walk which was about ten feet high and appeared to be right above a large muddy pond that had probably dried up during the summer.
we all nodded
"we need you all to jump off of it below"
we all looked kind of puzzled.
"anyone want to go first" asked Maria, who was a friend of charlotte's from college. She had originally come from Colombia and had worked as a tutor for charlotte while she was studying Spanish. The two had formed a very close bond since then and eventually Maria was asked to be a bridesmaid which she eagerly accepted. She had a light tan to her skin and shoulder length brown hair, as well as a really appealing accent from the Antioquia region.
We all stood there silent for about 30 seconds until we heard Linda speak.
"I will, it seems like fun"
we were all stunned
"but your outfit" someone said.
"I have plenty of clothing just like this at home" she said with just a hint of arrogance.
we all shrugged our shoulders and walked over to the doc where she was to jump off of.
Once we got there she simply said "catch you guys later" before diving into the pit and landing with a large splash.

we waited a while before seeing a figure spring up from the mud. Her blue dress was now a dark shade of brown as was her hair. we watched as she climbed up the hill next to the pit and slowly strutted over to us in a sexy manner. We all looked at her wide jawed as said simply looked down and said "it appears I missed a spot" before running and Jumping off again. This time she came up laughing and when she got back up the hill said "I present the newest trend from Mrs. Linda Davidson. now you now longer have to worry about ruining your most expensive clothing if it's already ruined"
We all had a little giggle at that

Now we had to decide who was up next.