It's a special episode because it's my birthday and I am wearing a lovely new dress! I am explaining to Cherry and Erica about the birthday special and how I will probably end up covered in cake etc... But Cherry offers a suggestion to get Erica messy as it is my birthday after all. I am delighted by this prospect!
Cherry asks me what I would like to do to Erica and I NEARLY say 'the three words'! But I DO know what I want to do to Erica, and that is mess her up with lots of cake! It seems like this is going to happen until I command Erica to 'give it to me' and I end up with a gooey cake smashed in my face!
I am rather upset about this and demand a pie to smash into Erica's face. 'Give me the pie!' I say to Cherry and give me the pis, she does! Right in my face! And then they both pie me some more! Cherry walks off very pleased with herself. And then Erica tells me it was a set up and it was all her idea. Cherry even gave her £100 for coming up with it.
What happens next involves Erica sayong 'I don't know', gunge, more pies and another cake in the face! I think Cherry needs a good gunging for all this!!!
What an amazing job the girls do in this one. Theacting is amazing, especially rom Jessie and Cherry. Their comic timing is superb and for anyone who liked YCDTOTV I can quite imagine this being a great lost scene.
I won't speak to the script as i wrote it, & modesty forbids, but utterly superb script (!) notwithstanding, there are some great pies , and a fantastic sliming here. Plus the reactions are exactly what those who enjoy humiliation will love. Jessie, especially, can gloat better than anyone in WAM, and when she tricks Erica into getting slimed, her pointing and laughter is worth the price of admission alone.
If you like wam with a plot, if you like wam where the recipient comedy-acts frustrated, annoyed, upset etc, while the others find it hilarious (like in any TV piefight in other words) you will love this.
And Jessie has priced it to sell too.
PS Would love to know if anyone does enjoy the scenes i script. I hoped they would appeal to those who liked the 3 YCDTOTV/3 stooges style situational wamming but maybe I'm the only one?? :?:
Really glad you liked it. I was beginning to think I was the only one who liked a good plot / set-up.
For Messy Jessie I have penned:
Cherry's Appraisal Cherry Office Punishment (aka Cherry pulls a sickie) YCDTOMJ: Slime Trigger YCDTOMJ: Pie Trigger Lara Gets The Treatment Customer Service: Cherry Gets Gunged (co-writer) Messtaurant: Cherry & Lara Get Jessie Messy (co-writer) Lara's Office Trial Jessie's Revenge The Interview With Cherry & Erica Interview Part Two (aka The Great Escape) YCDTOMJ: Birthday Cake
plus the as yet unpublished:
YCDTOMJ: Not For Us This Time Internet Issues Jessie Gets The Treatment Messtaurant: The Bad Waitress Gets Her Just Desserts (co-writer) The Spirit Of Christmas ***
For House of Mess I have done:
'Screw Wambabes, We Quit!!'
I also have a script outstanding with Messygirl which they are waiting to shoot, & 3 outstanding with Jessie which should be filmed tomorrow *** If you like a scenario & good acting, I trust you will enjoy these.