It's an uncomfortable night at Chipotle for the loser of this bet between two friends/coworkers. As always, feedback and suggestions always appreciated!
I really liked the story, but too bad it ends with them losing their jobs. Wouldn't some playful blackmail from the manager make for a better sequel???
hoffa73 said: I really liked the story, but too bad it ends with them losing their jobs. Wouldn't some playful blackmail from the manager make for a better sequel???
Lol you never know! I ended it that way because I never want to be stuck writing a series. I can always pick this back up down the line but I'm unsure if I'll make it a series like some have asked.
Love you, too
