Escape Room SurpriseStory by cornonthecobPosted 12/28/22 1436 views
Decided to upload my less explicit stories from reddit to here for the sake of preservation. Enjoy!
Zoe pulled off her t-shirt and jeans, and stepped into the vinyl catsuit resting at her feet. It crinkled as she pulled it up her legs, then over her body. As she stretched her arms through the holes, the material stretched back, hugging her slim frame. She grasped the zipper and slowly ran it along its track, the material of the catsuit hugging her ever closer. She ran her hand through her short brown hair as the final few inches of catsuit closed, it felt nice and tight against her skin. She turned to look at the changing room mirror. Her sharp face peered back, a small smile on her lips, she certainly looked the part of a spy; tight suit, close cropped hair, badass and sexy. Except for her feet. The staff member had told her not to wear anything on her feet. It made sense, considering this escape room was supposed to have a 'messy' twist, shoes aren't easy to wash. Zoe smiled again and stepped outside.
The hallway was empty, Zoe knocked on the door of the other changing room. "Alice! Are you done yet!" Zoe called.
"I can't believe you roped me into this"
"Hey! Its a present for your birthday, show some gratitude! Now come on out, I wanna see how you look!"
Slowly the door opened. Out stepped another catsuit clad girl. Zoe took a step back and admired her best friend's body, her curvy form looked amazing encased in sliky black. Alice had always been the fashionable one of the pair, and today she was no different. Alice had let her front zipper down slightly, showing off some cleavage. Her eyes peered out from under her fringe/bangs, a loose golden ponytail shaking around as she stepped forward.
"Well, how do I look?" Asked Alice.
"The birthday girl looks hot, as always" Zoe replied.
"Heh, I do appreciate you booking this for us, i've never done an escape room before." Alice said.
"Well you only turn 21 once, so I thought it'd better be memorable!"
"What are they like zoe? I didn't realise we got costumes! The bare feet thing is a litte weird though."
"Well, this escape room is a little bit different..."
Zoe was cut off by the door behind them opening. In stepped a young lady whom she recognized from the front desk of the building.
"Hello, my name is Sara, and I will be your guide and attendant for todays room! Can I just say, you both look amazing!"
The two girls shuffled slightly, embarrassed by the praise.
"Now, before we begin, I just need to go over a few rules. Firstly..."
She listed a few health and safety issues and other liabilities while the two friends waited patiently. Alice raised an eyebrow when she heard the words 'messy' and 'restraint' used, but a nudge from Zoe shut her up, this must be normal for escape rooms.
"Now that thats all over with, the basic rules are, you have one hour to escape, if you succeed you'll win a prize, if you fail, you'll suffer a punishment!" Continued Sara
"P-punishment?" Asked Alice with a quiver in her voice.
"Don't worry, its all in good fun, you'll enjoy it" assured the attendant.
"Don't worry!" Said Zoe, repeating the attendant, and squeezed her friend's shoulder.
"Now, the senario. You are two spies, sent on a top secret mission to steal important documents from a foreign agency. Managing to track down the documents to this building, you broke in, found the papers, and nearly managed to escape. However, you were caught."
Suddenly, a black cloth was pulled over each of the girls eyes from behind. Alice let out a gasp, while Zoe grinned, enjoying every moment of the experience. Their hands were pulled in front of them and loosely tied with thin rope.
"Now agents, it is up to you to break out of prison, grab the documents, and escape! Good luck!"
Sara took the two girls by their hands, and led them onwards to the escape room.
The girls were sat down on chairs one after the other by a push on their shoulders, the bindings around their hands removed, then they felt leather straps being fastened around their wrists and waist, promply securing them to their seats. Zoe couldn't help but smile, while Alice was a little bit more perturbed, not having the luxury of checking this place out online beforehand.
The girls heard the attendant's footsteps leave the room and waited in joint silence, not daring to talk before the game had started. A crackle came from a speaker.
"Spies! You may now start your daring escape. Quickly, the clock is ticking!"
Zoe bent her body double and pushed her blindfold towards her secured hand, grasping it, then sitting upright again, freeing her vision. As her eyes adjusted to the light she could make out her friend pulling away her own blindfold, they were sitting facing each other, with a glass screen inbetween.
"So, what've we gotta do?" Said Alice.
"Lets see here" replied zoe.
She looked down at the straps around her wrists and belly. They were locked securely, exiting and re-entering the chair itself. She couldn't see a keyhole or any release mechanism, meaning it must be released electronically somehow.
"It's a maze!" Alice said, interupting Zoe's thought.
She looked back at the glass screen and noticed what her friend had pointed out. There were actually two panes of glass with little white walls inbetween them forming a giant 3d labyrinth. At some of the dead ends were little black pieces of plastic, perhaps they meant something? At the bottom of the maze was a metal marble, and on the outside, a magnet attatched to a stick. Zoe looked up and saw a slot at the top, the same size as the metal ball, it was all starting to make sense.
"Looks like we have to get that ball to the top!" Exclaimed Alice. "But how the heck do we reach the magnet?" She wriggled her bound hands for dramatic effect.
"I've got an idea" smirked zoe.
She sunk low in her seat, as low as the straps would allow, and wrapped her toes around the stick attatched to the magnet. Atleast now it made sense why they were barefoot. Carefully she put the magnet against the glass, and started dragging the ball up along the maze.
"Nice one Zoe!" Said Alice, as she also grasped her magnet between her toes and began moving it up the glass. Up and around a corner, then a loop, a left and a right! Zoe was getting the hang of it. She looked through the glass and met Alice's eyes. They shared a look of acomplishment, but Alice's smile quickly soured.
"Zoe! Look ou-" before she could finish, the marble fell from Zoe's magnet, and clattered backwards down the maze. While distracted Zoe had pushed her magnet a little too far forwards, getting the ball stuck on a wall and seperating them. The girls watched in silence as the ball fell and came to rest in a corner, on top of one of the black squares.
Alice started to talk. "Well that su- BZZZZZZT" A loud siren cut her off. She looked quizically at Zoe through the glass before suddenly feeling a horrible new sensation. She felt a mass of sticky, chunky, wet, something or other splatter down over her head and shoulders. She was temporarily blinded as it rolled down her face, and had to use all of her willpower not to let go of her magnet.
Zoe was giggling to herself, trying to suppress her laughter. She had just seen a bucket of runny oatmeal dumped over her friend from above, completely covering her upper body, and running down the creases of her catsuit.
"Oh my God, Alice!" Zoe called out. All she got in reply was a disgusted groan. Alice flicked open her eyes, her long eyelashes feeling heavy with their new coating.
"What the hell is this stuff" she asked, looking down at the grey substance coating her cleavage.
"Oatmeal! Looks like you got punished for me dropping my marble" Zoe replied in between bursts of laughter.
"Is that right?" Said Alice in a strict voice. "Then I wonder what will happen if I do this!" She pulled her foot away from the glass maze, allowing her own marble to fall into one of the pits. Zoe's laughter suddenly stopped in anticipation as the siren sounded again, yet to her surprise, she recieved no punishment. Instead, from above, a bucket's worth of baked beans were dropped onto a stunned Alice, most running down her face and head and adding to the pool of mess in her lap, while a few beans decorated her crown of oatmeal.
A voice crackled over the speaker "play nice girls, no intentional dropping of the ball".
Alice shook her head, slimy bean juice and flecks of oatmeal flying off, and re-grasped her magnet with her toes. "Just so you know Zoe, this isn't how I imagined i'd be spending my birthday."
"Don't act like you aren't having fun Ali"
"Ok, maybe a little" said Alice with a smirk.
The girls made good progress with the maze, and before they knew it, their legs were stretched into the air, pushing the magnet as close to the top, and the finish line, as possible.
"Just a little further, Alice!"
Alice had sunk down as far as she could go in her chair to extend her legs, causing the mess to roll back over her body and around her neck. She braved the sensation for a final push, and delicately pushed her marble through the hole. A triuphant tune played over the speakers and she felt the straps securing her to the chair release. Quickly she stood up and began wiping the mess off of herself.
Zoe, meanwhile, was nearing the end too. Her long legs, clad in their black sheathes, stretched elegantly upwards as she carefully slotted the ball through the hole. She breathed a sigh of relief and relaxed, however this was quickly interrupted. The buzzer sounded, followed by a bucket of very heavy tomato ketchup falling from above. As Zoe was so far reclined in her chair, it splattered right into her face, as well as over her petite breasts and shoulders. Her restraints released and she slid to the ground in shock at what had happened. She wiped her eyes and saw a giggling Alice, now somewhat cleaner, standing before here.
"Looks like it doesn't pay to be last Zoe!" Said Alice, extending her hand to help the tomato covered girl to her feet. They wiped some of the mess from Zoe's hair, then looked around for what to do next.
"Hmmmm, I can't see much else in here except the magnet game and the entrance" Zoe said out loud. She went back over to the chair she was moments ago tied to and started prodding it, looking for some clue.
A voice came over the speaker; "Spies! You have used 15 minutes of your time, 45 minutes remaining!"
"Damn it Zoe, we've gotta hurry. I really don't wanna face the 'punishment'." said Alice.
"Don't worry I think i've found something." Zoe reached under the chair and pulled out a large screwdriver. "Now, if memory serves, ah yes" she crouched in the corner of the room next to an inconspicuous air vent, painted the same colour as the walls, and quickly removed the cover using the screwdriver. It was quite dark inside, but seemed to be dimly lit through slits further up, there was atleast enough light to see a bend in the vent further down.
"Well, only one way to go!" Said Zoe enthusiastically. Alice hesitated at the thought of the cramped space.
"Come on Ali, we'd better get a move on if you don't want to face 'the punishment'."
At the mention of those words, Alice stepped towards her friend who had turned and crawled into the vent, and qyickly followed her.
The vent was tight, about 10cm of space to each side of the girls, and the same above. Their shiny catsuits squeaked as they shuffled their knees across the floor. When Zoe crawled around the first bend, she jumped suddenly. Her hand had just landed in something slimy. Through the dim light she could make out a black looking liquid coating the floor.
"Prepare yourself, looks like we're getting messy again" she called back to her friend, getting only a sigh in response.
The slime was just deep enough to engulf the girls fingers when they placed their hands flat in it. Zoe played with it for a second shuffling her fingers and letting the slime run through them, before a prod from behind reminded her they were on the clock. Alice wasn't as keen on the sensation, the black gunge tickling her bare toes every time she shunted one of her knees forwards. After a couple more bends, Zoe suddenly stopped, causing Alice to headbutt her shiny backside.
"Hey! Whats the holdup?"
"Damnit, theres some kind of puzzle blocking us. It looks like a spiderweb made of knots of rope, i'll have to undo it before we can get past."
Thanfully, Zoe had been a girlscout, and began working on one of several knots that barred their path. Unfortunately, her slime covered hands made it very difficult to grasp at the fiddly rope, and she started wasting precious time.
Alice took the opportunity to rest. She wiped some of the splashed up slime from her front, then closed her eyes for a moment of meditation. She was processing the trials so far, as well as thinking about how she could get Zoe back after this was over. Alice smiled to herself, she had to hand it to her friend, although embarassing, this was kind of fun. They were best friends for a reason, Zoe always knew when to push her to try new things. Maybe Alice could get her back on her own birthd-
"Eahhhhh" A cry from Zoe interrupted her thought. Alice opened her eyes and saw black sludge cascading from a hole in the ceiling of the vent over her friend. From her rear-view Alice could see it rolling down her head, her short hair completely patted flat by the viscous liquid. It came sliding down her back, almost as if her catsuit had come alive and was doubling over itself. Alice watched in horror as it ran between her friends tightly encased ass-cheeks, Zoe giving a shudder in acknowledgement of this fact, and ran down over her bare soles, completely shrouding the girl in black slime.
Alice backed up, trying to create some space between herself and Zoe incase she got splashed, however to her horror, she felt a wall behind her where only 10 seconds ago there had been empty space. It must've gone up when she was distracted! She gingerly looked up as a hole was opened abover her head, and quietly accepted her fate as the same cascade of slime came pouring over her.
Zoe, meanwhile, spat out a mouthful of black goo, Her world had momentarily turned to a deaf dark-wetness. She desperately tried to wipe her eyes, the last few drops of slime trickling from the ceiling onto her saturated mop of hair. She came to her senses and was made aware of Alices hand grabbing onto her leg, a muffled moan could be picked out from the slapping and gushing noise of the waterfall of sludge behind her. Zoe squeezed her hand behind her, made much easier now by the slime lubricating her vinyl suit, and grasped her friends hand. Even for Zoe, who booked this place, and may have experienced getting messy before, being cramped in here and absolutely drenched with slime was an unnerving experience, so she couldn't imagine how Alice was feeling. She felt a twinge of guilt, but to her surprise, after a few seconds, Alice let go of her hand and pushed it away.
"Kweep gwowing!"
Alice managed to call out inbetween mouthfulls of slime, the stream falling onto her only beginning to slow down. Zoe took a deep breath and redoubled her efforts, shakily pulling apart one of the knots. Success! The rope webbing fell away. She reached back and grabbed Alice's hand, before leading her still blind friend onwards passed the holdup. Zoe was in such a hurry that she didn't see the chute before her, and fell headfirst down it, pulling Alice with her!
Alice had a soft landing, Zoe did not. The two girls lay there, one on top of the other, momentarily stunned from the fall. Alice wiped her eyes, the gunge still coating her face entirely. She was met by the sight of Zoe sprawled out beneath her, now opening her eyes, her pale skin painted black, looking almost bald with the slime spread smoothly over her short hair.
"Hey" said Alice
"Hey" came the reply. "Can you get off of me"
Alice stood up quickly, followed by zoe.
The girls held each others gaze for a second, before embracing each other in a squidgey, slippery, bear hug. Zoe ran her friend's mashed up clump of a ponytail through her fingers, once golden blonde, now a murky brown.
"Are you OK!" Zoe asked "Alice, i'm so sorry, if you want to stop we ca-"
Alice put her index finger up to her friend's mouth, silencing her.
"Two things Zoe. Number one, I am so getting you back for this." She said dead seriously. "And number two... I am so happy that you brought me here!" A beaming smile spread across her face, which was mirrored by Zoe, all of the tension dissapating. "You're ok then, I was so worried about you back there?" Asked Zoe.
"I mean, it was pretty disgusting and frightening, but fun too. I feel like i'm in a real spy movie, the kind we used to stay up watching at sleepovers! Only with a lot of added mess."
Zoe wiped an icicle of slime from her friend's nose. A noise came from the heavens and a familiar voice sounded.
"Spies! Half of your time is gone! You must complete the mission or all will be lost!"
The girls gave one final squeeze in their embrace, then let go. For the first time, they took in their new surroundings. There was a stream of water running from the ceiling, then a door leading out. Using only a couple of minutes, the girls washed away the worst of the mess, the lukewarm water dissolving most of the black slime. Alice re-tied her ponytail, and they headed through the door. Thankfully, their objective was in front of them. A plinth with a briefcase on sat at the end of a long dark corridor. Sara's voice came over the speaker.
"Spies, your objective is before you. Simply touch the briefcase to win!"
"We've done, it Alice! With so much time to spare!" Zoe exclaimed.
The speaker started up again. "However, there may be a few problems getting to it"
Bright lights suddenly turned on, properly illuminating the room. The floor slightly beyond where they were was a bright shiny pink colour, glistening under the intense light. Alice knelt down and pressed into it with her index finger. To her surprise, it sunk in, and kept sinking until it went past her knuckle. She started pulling it out, but felt much more resistance than anticipated. When she did withdraw it, a long string of elastic slime trailed from her finger to the glistening carpet, trying to tug her back.
"Oh my god, it's a hallway of glue!" She cried out.
"Alice, we've done so well. Lets just take it easy, we've still got half an hour"
The speaker came on again "By the way, theres some safety equipment on a table by the door, you're gonna want to wear it."
On the table were two pairs of clear swimming goggles. The girls quickly put them on and pulled them over their eyes.
"Now then..."
Zoe tentatively lifted her leg, and in slow motion placed her foot onto the expanse of pink glue. She slowly pushed her foot into it, finding a solid floor about 5cm down. She wriggled her toes, but they were quite stuck, strands of the pink goo holding them down.
"Careful Zoe" Alice said, genuine concern in her voice.
Zoe lifted her other foot, carefully balancing on her stuck leg, and took a big stride. Again, her foot plunged down into the pink mixture, sticking firmly in it. She slowly began tugging on her previous leg, slowly teasing it away from the glue, but the glue put up a fight. She pulled her knee up as high as she could, but a long trail of pink still connected her foot to the floor.
"Alice! I need you to come stabilize me, quickly!"
Alice jumped to attention, and hurriedly repeated her friend's steps, coming to stop beside her. Grabbing on to Alice's shoulders, Zoe was able to wrench her foot out of the morass and place it infront of her other one. One step down, a hundred to go.
"Now you go" Zoe said
Alice repeated the process, drawing her knee up into her body and slowly drawing it away from its starting point, the elastic glue pulling and tugging all the way. Next it was Zoe's turn again. After about 5 steps, the girls noticed something however.
"Oh god, I think its getting deeper" whispered Alice in a worried voice.
She looked down at her feet, or where her feet should be, and saw only the swirling pink gloss. It was past their ankles now!
"We're getting there Alice, don't worry"
The girls carried on, each step getting deeper, each step getting harder. When it was a the bottoms of their calves, Zoe stumbled slightly, her hand getting engulfed by the glue. It took both her free hand as well as the tugging of Alice to pull it out.
"Shit, sorry Ali. It looks like we can't afford any more mistakes." Zoe spread her fingers out, strands of glue attatching them together. She did not want to fall in this stuff.
Sara's voice cafe from a far away speaker
"15 minutes Spies! Hurry!"
The girls had made it just past the halfway mark, and the glue was midway up their calves.
"Here, take my hand Alice! Ok, now I step. Oh! Careful. Ok. Now you. Take my hand. Wait, look out!"
Alice had one leg in the glue, and one leg out of it, when she made her fatal move. Her hand Overshot Zoe's by a few inches, and tilted her forwards. She tried desperately to regain her balance but it was no use, she fell onto her hands and knees. She was now completely fixed to the floor.
"Oh my God, oh my God. Zoe! What do I do!?" Alice tugged desperately at the glue restraing her but it was no use, as soon as one hand started to lift slightly, her bodyweight shifted and she just got pulled back in to the swamp.
"Don't worry! I'll come back and get you!" Zoe called back. Just as she was beggining to turn however, she saw something that stopped her dead in her tracks. A panel was taken away on the cieling, and a runny pink substance, the same one on the floor, begain steadily descending from it, right over Alice's body. The viscous nature of the liquid gave Zoe 5 seconds to stand and stare as Alice thrashed about, not realising what was about to happen to her. She felt a heavy mass land on her neck and let out a shriek. It hugged her tightly, as if she was wearing a wet, sticky, travel pillow. She felt more of the stuff land on her back, the pink slime glazing her black catsuit. It was so heavy that her arms and legs felt weak, and she began to sink deeper into the glue. Zoe could only watch in horror as a giant blob engulfed the back of Alice's head, pulling it nearer and nearer to the floor. A final carpet of the stuff was released from on high, flattening Alice into the ground. From Zoe's point of view, she could just see a pink mound, with a sillouette of a black figure inside of it, the shiny snake created by Alice's glue encased ponytail visible on top. The girl in the glue lifted her head, blowing a big bubble of slime on her mouth which burst in dramatic fashion, re-coating her face with slime. She took a deep breath and called out to Zoe, strands of the slime pulling between her lips. "Qwickey, gwet two we end. Gwo!"
Zoe's heart was racing, she quickly span back around, and started to move. Mustering all of her strength, she tore one leg out of the glue and swung it forwards. After a minute to breathe, she dragged her other leg up, the glue now lapping up to her knees. A few more steps, and the breifcase would be within reach. She looked back at Alice, now a writing mass of pink and black, struggling against the embrace of the glue. Zoe had to do this, for her. She took a second to rest. After regaining her breath, she bent her knees and jumped as hard as she could!
Alice had given up struggling by this point, and was laying flat on her stomach, her head pointed forwards, watching Zoe through her now pink tinted goggles. Although a miserable situation, seeing her friend jump then fall flat on her face provided some comic relief to lighten the mood. Alice blew another bubble of slime over her mouth. Looks like they were going to face 'the punishment' after all. Another dousing of glue fell from above onto her body, burying her in a mound of the stuff. She turned her head sideways and relaxed, she was actually quite comfy in her cocoon.
While in mid air, it slowly dawned on Zoe that she wasn't doing to make it, covering only about half of the distance she needed to. She swore to herself and braced for impact. Landing with a splat, she sunk deep into the glue, her vision totally turned pink. She felt it seep through the openings in her catsuit, making it feel even tighter and more sticky. She lifted her head up and looked forward, the documents were so close, yet so far. She opened her mouth to beath, a familiar air bubble forming over her mouth then exploding, granting her its permission to inhale. She felt helpless. She jolted slightly when her first layering of glue fell from above, coating the back half of her body. Like Alice, Zoe rested her head, and resigned herself to her fate.
Sara was staring at the monitor, a self satisfied smile on her face. "Aww, looks like Alice has gone to sleep!"
It had already been 5 minutes since the girls got fully stuck in the glue, but Sara was determined to give them their full hour in the escape room, and maybe a bit longer for her personal pleasure.
"I think she needs a wakeup call, and we'd better not leave Zoe out."
Sara pressed a button on her control panel, and another stream of glue was released on the girls. She giggled when Alice jolted awake, struggling under the mound of glue for a moment, before remembering where she was and relaxing.
"I'll leave those two alone for now, i've got a punishment to prepare."
Alice and Zoe endured another 10 minutes of sticky fun, before some staff members showed up with ropes. Throwing them to the girls, they grabbed on and were dragged out of the glue pit.
"Ahhh, free at last!" Said Alice, putting her arm around Zoe.
"Yeah, it was fun, but I was beginning to cramp".
"Not so fast!" Said Sara, wandering over. She was wearing a catsuit just like them, although completely clean. "As you failed to complete your mission, you are no longer employed as spies. And for trying to steal MY documents, I think its only fitting that you get punished"
The two girls looked st each other and grinned, at the back of their minds, they alwas knew they'd end up punished.
"But first, lets clean you up."
The pink covered girls were led to a cubicle, pink sticky footprints, left in their wake.They were sprayed with some kind of special foam, completely coating them, front and back. Even when getting cleaned, it was a messy business. Next they were hosed down with water, and as if by magic, the pink glue was gone. Alice pulled off her goggles and shook her hair loose, only for them to be quickly replaced by a blindfold. Alice suffered the same treatment.
"Put your hands behind your backs, prisoners!"
The two girls did as they were ordered. Their hands were tied together, as they had been an hour previously, and the two girls were led away by Sara.
They were marched for a few minutes, Alice was able to relax a little bit more this time, and Zoe loved every minute of their roleplay. A slight aprehension creeped up on both girls however, when they went through a door, and felt a very sudden drop in temperature, and the sounds of cars and people. The girls were stood still and untied. They heard a clicking sound, then, first Zoe then Alice, were bent forwards, hands out front. They both felt the wood of a pillory close around their necks and wrists.
At last, Sara removed the girls blindfolds. Both instantly turned red with emarrassment. They were out on the street, infront of the escape room building, locked in pillories, wearing tight shiny catsuits.
"You have got to be kidding me..." Alice said to herself. Sara took out two cardboard plackards with string attatched and hung them around the girl's necks.
"'Pie a Spie'." Zoe read out loud.
"You've got that right" said Sara
"Step right up, and give these pesky spies the punishment of their lives!" Sara called out to a quickly assembling crowd. A few people pulled out their phones and began taking pictures and videos.
Zoe tilted her head towards her friend. Just as the first pie was slammed into her face, sending custard and cream flying over her head. "Happy birthday, Alice" she said jokingly.
Alice spat out some pie crust and retorted in a sarcastic tone "Thanks for the present Zoe!" She shook her head to clear some debris. "But don't forget! It's your birthday in a few months, and I am NOT going to let this one go!"
Zoe laughed "I'm sure you wo-mphghhhh!"
Sara shoved a pie into her face, shutting her up.
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