Hi all! I actually did it, I finally wrote a story after years of reading them. It's a bit of an outlandish scenario but any wam story usually is lol it's a simple premise. I hope you like it, and please feel free to offer feedback on any future lost bet/vote scenarios you may want to see!
Wow seriously this is your first work? It's really good! You've set the interaction but the main characters up nicely, included enough real world references realistic foods for the situation all in all excellent work! Hope to see more of your work in the future.
enswan said: Wow seriously this is your first work? It's really good! You've set the interaction but the main characters up nicely, included enough real world references realistic foods for the situation all in all excellent work! Hope to see more of your work in the future.
That's so kind thanks so much! If you ever have any ideas for future scenarios please feel free to suggest!
That's so kind thanks so much! If you ever have any ideas for future scenarios please feel free to suggest!
How about Trish realises she was slightly turned on trashing Alison and decides she wants to orchestrate a situation gunging another "victim"? But this time she's deciding if she's going to risk losing or cheat, she's planning on how to make it yuckier, how to make it more humiliating and deciding who she wants to get?
That's so kind thanks so much! If you ever have any ideas for future scenarios please feel free to suggest!
How about Trish realises she was slightly turned on trashing Alison and decides she wants to orchestrate a situation gunging another "victim"? But this time she's deciding if she's going to risk losing or cheat, she's planning on how to make it yuckier, how to make it more humiliating and deciding who she wants to get?
Love the continuity! Maybe as time goes on there can be some recurring characters. As of now just trying to focus on new scenarios.
Similar to the original premis, and something that's widely viewed worldwide you could have a few girls bet on the Olympics, either who wins most medals (Norway, Germany, USA, Austria, Holland are the current top 5) or in specific events like the four semifinalists of the Men's/Woman's Ice hockey.
enswan said: Similar to the original premis, and something that's widely viewed worldwide you could have a few girls bet on the Olympics, either who wins most medals (Norway, Germany, USA, Austria, Holland are the current top 5) or in specific events like the four semifinalists of the Men's/Woman's Ice hockey.
enswan said: Similar to the original premis, and something that's widely viewed worldwide you could have a few girls bet on the Olympics, either who wins most medals (Norway, Germany, USA, Austria, Holland are the current top 5) or in specific events like the four semifinalists of the Men's/Woman's Ice hockey.
This is a great idea!
Just jumping in on this. Another idea would be have each girl pick a country to represent and have them wear swimsuits of that country's colors and wrestle in oil!
Great story, btw! I left comments underneath the story!
Thanks all so much for the kind words really! I'm always trying to think of new scenarios. The women's hockey gold match presents an interesting opportunity lol I'll see if I can find the time!
Love you, too
