Good afternoon everybody.
This year my comics blog is 10 years old and I decided to restructure it.
I created a new story with a new drawing style.
I hope you don't mind that my drawings aren't very good.
See the story and say what you think, every opinion is welcome.
Thanks.

English:

http://tortaseretas.blogspot.com/2023/08/new-story.html

Portuguese:

http://tortaseretas.blogspot.com/2023/08/blog-post.html

Tell me what you think of the story and the drawings.
I plan on creating new stories soon and all feedback, positive or negative, is valid.
I know I still need to improve a lot.