I'm looking for prereaders to help me find technical bugs, typos, awkward phrasing and other issues in the upcoming content for an interactive choose-your-own-adventure story about life at a wet-and-messy summer camp (Five Summer Days -- https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays/).

Description: You are Daniel, a young man on his way to five days of Camp Geas, a wet-and-messy summer camp for young adults. Together with the competitive Cori, ever-happy Helen and kinky Ichika, you play through games, challenges, activites and punishments and enjoy your summer life together.

Length: The published content runs at about 10,000 words, and the new content that I would like you to preread runs at about 15,000 words for one playthrough. You'd read perhaps triple that amount if you wanted to read every option and every path (you don't need to!).

If you want to preread: Thank you! Please send me a direct message here, make a comment in this thread, or email me (my address is at the bottom of my website).

Interested in the next part as part 1 was stellar already

Agreed. Been looking forward to part 2. I can certainly take a look at it and try and break things

Hi Mate,

PArt one was awesome and a cliff hanger so defo up for reading further for you.

Part 1 was brilliant pal, would love to read more

i would like to pre read the next chapter op the story

Thank you everyone! Your feedback really helped the story a lot and I appreciate it.

The story is now published and you can now read through both days at https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays

Played through day 2 once already and playing it through a second time now. Really enjoying the different outcomes. Can't wait for you doing the other 3 days

Gotta jump in here and say how incredible this story is. Messed around with it for a good while now and still finding new little events and messy scenes. On top of that there's actually some real depth to the characters, making them more interesting than "attractive blonde pie target #213".

Can't recommend giving this a go enough. Very much looking forward to the rest!

Amazing story!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Best wam story I've ever read!!

Just echoing everyone here, amazing interactive story, i absolutely love it! And I really enjoyed decoding the note, looking forward to seeing that through!