Jouette said: I'm creating Five Summer Days, an interactive story about a wet-and-messy summer camp for young adults, full of challenges, punishments, adventures and fun. (https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays)

I'm about to release the day 4 update, and I'm looking for prereaders who would find technical bugs, typos, awkward phrasing and other issues.

Day 4 features:
* Two epic challenges, many punishments and many smaller scenes
* Whole group activities, but also opportunities to develop individual relationships
* Opportunities for optional flirting
* Improved technicals (import/export, named save files, font rendering, error recovery)

Length: The new content is about 15,000 words for one playthrough.

If you want to preread: Thank you! Please send me a direct message or make a comment in this thread.