Ok, pie and kink people, because there was some discussion in another thread as to what's fiction and what isn't, I composed a recollection of a true story.
With the way you write it really is hard to tell the fact from the fiction! You have provided us with another great story. The ending was not so great, but in real life everything isin't always happy ever after.
dalamar666 said: With the way you write it really is hard to tell the fact from the fiction! You have provided us with another great story. The ending was not so great, but in real life everything isin't always happy ever after.
Man, noted! I'll leave off the sad ending from now on!
I draw a lot from fact, for my fiction. And I borrow from the banter that happened IRL for my fiction, or from conversations I've had about the kink, and how different people approach it.
I am sorry that my comment sounded like negative critique about the ending. I was trying to show my appreciation for it because in real life not everything ends all wrapped up in a pretty bow with no casualties.
dalamar666 said: I am sorry that my comment sounded like negative critique about the ending. I was trying to show my appreciation for it because in real life not everything ends all wrapped up in a pretty bow with no casualties.
No worries! I appreciated the comment because I realized that my last line was superfluous and had no relevance to the story. Best left out, IMO!
Your stories that you write are one of a kind and any producer could turn it into reality someday. Thank you for your work and keep the stories coming.