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"I need help with my custom!"
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I am doing a 30 minute custom with Jordana Leigh this month. She will not be in it this time though. Instead, I have Karly, Pisces, and Erica.
As many of you know the ingredients to my customs are:
1. Pies to the face only
2. Clothes ripping
3. Plot
4. Humiliation
I am currently experiencing writer's block. I can't think of a good idea. Using the elements listed above, I'd appreciate it if you folks could give me a few ideas.
And no, I don't want to make this a co-production with anyone. Sorry.
As many of you know the ingredients to my customs are:
1. Pies to the face only
2. Clothes ripping
3. Plot
4. Humiliation
I am currently experiencing writer's block. I can't think of a good idea. Using the elements listed above, I'd appreciate it if you folks could give me a few ideas.
And no, I don't want to make this a co-production with anyone. Sorry.
I've always wanted to see a remake of the Threes Company pie fight at the bake off
Let's hear em!!
Karly is a teacher and the other two are students. Pisces and Erica are always misbehaving and not taking their studies seriously. Frustrated with them, Karly decides to give them a test, but must walk up to the chalkboard in order to write out the correct answer. If they get the answer wrong, they get punished, and Karly's favorite form of punishment is pies to the face.
Pisces is up first. Karly asks a tough, but answerable question and demands her to write the answer on the board. Pisces stands up from her chair and is about to walk to the front when her shirt gets stuck on the edge of the desk and gets ripped off. Humiliated, she covers herself up and goes to take her seat again, but Karly is far too impatient, ordering her to walk to the front of the classroom. Pisces sighs and shamefully walks to the chalkboard, thinks for a minute about her answer with a worried look on her face, and scratches it down. Unfortunately, she is incorrect and Karly pies her in the face.
Erica is next. Karly asks a different question, but still difficult for someone to answer if they haven't studied like they should. Before Erica can walk to the board, Pisces gets jealous that Erica's shirt didn't rip like hers did, so she tears it off, distributing the humiliation to her fellow classmate. Erica is now upset, but Karly slams a ruler on her desk, silencing the scuffle and redirecting their attention to what's really important. Erica walks to the chalkboard and writes down her answer, but like Pisces' is also incorrect. Karly pies Erica in the face, but Erica's emotions get the best of her.
Erica absolutely does not like this new teaching method and makes sure that Karly knows it, slamming a pie in her face and ripping her clothes off. Pisces joins in the rebellion and pies Karly as well. To defend herself, Karly gets armed with a pie in each hand and gets them both simultaneously. Now, its a free-for-all until all the pies are gone.
This is just my imagination running wild, but I think its a decent idea. It utilizes the requirements you asked for. Feel free to make the necessary changes to your liking. Hope this helps!
Pisces is up first. Karly asks a tough, but answerable question and demands her to write the answer on the board. Pisces stands up from her chair and is about to walk to the front when her shirt gets stuck on the edge of the desk and gets ripped off. Humiliated, she covers herself up and goes to take her seat again, but Karly is far too impatient, ordering her to walk to the front of the classroom. Pisces sighs and shamefully walks to the chalkboard, thinks for a minute about her answer with a worried look on her face, and scratches it down. Unfortunately, she is incorrect and Karly pies her in the face.
Erica is next. Karly asks a different question, but still difficult for someone to answer if they haven't studied like they should. Before Erica can walk to the board, Pisces gets jealous that Erica's shirt didn't rip like hers did, so she tears it off, distributing the humiliation to her fellow classmate. Erica is now upset, but Karly slams a ruler on her desk, silencing the scuffle and redirecting their attention to what's really important. Erica walks to the chalkboard and writes down her answer, but like Pisces' is also incorrect. Karly pies Erica in the face, but Erica's emotions get the best of her.
Erica absolutely does not like this new teaching method and makes sure that Karly knows it, slamming a pie in her face and ripping her clothes off. Pisces joins in the rebellion and pies Karly as well. To defend herself, Karly gets armed with a pie in each hand and gets them both simultaneously. Now, its a free-for-all until all the pies are gone.
This is just my imagination running wild, but I think its a decent idea. It utilizes the requirements you asked for. Feel free to make the necessary changes to your liking. Hope this helps!
Pie one, get one free!
musthavepie said: Karly is a teacher and the other two are students. Pisces and Erica are always misbehaving and not taking their studies seriously. Frustrated with them, Karly decides to give them a test, but must walk up to the chalkboard in order to write out the correct answer. If they get the answer wrong, they get punished, and Karly's favorite form of punishment is pies to the face.
Pisces is up first. Karly asks a tough, but answerable question and demands her to write the answer on the board. Pisces stands up from her chair and is about to walk to the front when her shirt gets stuck on the edge of the desk and gets ripped off. Humiliated, she covers herself up and goes to take her seat again, but Karly is far too impatient, ordering her to walk to the front of the classroom. Pisces sighs and shamefully walks to the chalkboard, thinks for a minute about her answer with a worried look on her face, and scratches it down. Unfortunately, she is incorrect and Karly pies her in the face.
Erica is next. Karly asks a different question, but still difficult for someone to answer if they haven't studied like they should. Before Erica can walk to the board, Pisces gets jealous that Erica's shirt didn't rip like hers did, so she tears it off, distributing the humiliation to her fellow classmate. Erica is now upset, but Karly slams a ruler on her desk, silencing the scuffle and redirecting their attention to what's really important. Erica walks to the chalkboard and writes down her answer, but like Pisces' is also incorrect. Karly pies Erica in the face, but Erica's emotions get the best of her.
Erica absolutely does not like this new teaching method and makes sure that Karly knows it, slamming a pie in her face and ripping her clothes off. Pisces joins in the rebellion and pies Karly as well. To defend herself, Karly gets armed with a pie in each hand and gets them both simultaneously. Now, its a free-for-all until all the pies are gone.
This is just my imagination running wild, but I think its a decent idea. It utilizes the requirements you asked for. Feel free to make the necessary changes to your liking. Hope this helps!
Pisces is up first. Karly asks a tough, but answerable question and demands her to write the answer on the board. Pisces stands up from her chair and is about to walk to the front when her shirt gets stuck on the edge of the desk and gets ripped off. Humiliated, she covers herself up and goes to take her seat again, but Karly is far too impatient, ordering her to walk to the front of the classroom. Pisces sighs and shamefully walks to the chalkboard, thinks for a minute about her answer with a worried look on her face, and scratches it down. Unfortunately, she is incorrect and Karly pies her in the face.
Erica is next. Karly asks a different question, but still difficult for someone to answer if they haven't studied like they should. Before Erica can walk to the board, Pisces gets jealous that Erica's shirt didn't rip like hers did, so she tears it off, distributing the humiliation to her fellow classmate. Erica is now upset, but Karly slams a ruler on her desk, silencing the scuffle and redirecting their attention to what's really important. Erica walks to the chalkboard and writes down her answer, but like Pisces' is also incorrect. Karly pies Erica in the face, but Erica's emotions get the best of her.
Erica absolutely does not like this new teaching method and makes sure that Karly knows it, slamming a pie in her face and ripping her clothes off. Pisces joins in the rebellion and pies Karly as well. To defend herself, Karly gets armed with a pie in each hand and gets them both simultaneously. Now, its a free-for-all until all the pies are gone.
This is just my imagination running wild, but I think its a decent idea. It utilizes the requirements you asked for. Feel free to make the necessary changes to your liking. Hope this helps!
I never thought of using a school for a setting. You are thinking outside of my "box" which is exactly what I need. Thank you!
Three girls in an office, all identically dressed, in tight pencil skirts and striped blouses with high heels.
One of the girls has cocked up an order from the caterers for pies for an office meeting and all three girls have been shouted at by the office manager who has ordered them into the boardroom, where the excess pies are.
The other two girls decide to take it out on the one who has got them into trouble by slamming pies into her face, then they rip off her clothes, leaving her in just g string and heels. Humiliated girl is then sat down while the other two then start arguing about what to do with her next. The stripped and pied girl then pies one of the other two, she doesn't notice who did it, and assumes it was the other, still fully clothed girl.
She then pies her, and the two girls rip off each others clothes, while pieing each other. Third girl joins in, all three end up just in heels and loads of mess!
One of the girls has cocked up an order from the caterers for pies for an office meeting and all three girls have been shouted at by the office manager who has ordered them into the boardroom, where the excess pies are.
The other two girls decide to take it out on the one who has got them into trouble by slamming pies into her face, then they rip off her clothes, leaving her in just g string and heels. Humiliated girl is then sat down while the other two then start arguing about what to do with her next. The stripped and pied girl then pies one of the other two, she doesn't notice who did it, and assumes it was the other, still fully clothed girl.
She then pies her, and the two girls rip off each others clothes, while pieing each other. Third girl joins in, all three end up just in heels and loads of mess!
mrangry said: Three girls in an office, all identically dressed, in tight pencil skirts and striped blouses with high heels.
One of the girls has cocked up an order from the caterers for pies for an office meeting and all three girls have been shouted at by the office manager who has ordered them into the boardroom, where the excess pies are.
The other two girls decide to take it out on the one who has got them into trouble by slamming pies into her face, then they rip off her clothes, leaving her in just g string and heels. Humiliated girl is then sat down while the other two then start arguing about what to do with her next. The stripped and pied girl then pies one of the other two, she doesn't notice who did it, and assumes it was the other, still fully clothed girl.
She then pies her, and the two girls rip off each others clothes, while pieing each other. Third girl joins in, all three end up just in heels and loads of mess!
One of the girls has cocked up an order from the caterers for pies for an office meeting and all three girls have been shouted at by the office manager who has ordered them into the boardroom, where the excess pies are.
The other two girls decide to take it out on the one who has got them into trouble by slamming pies into her face, then they rip off her clothes, leaving her in just g string and heels. Humiliated girl is then sat down while the other two then start arguing about what to do with her next. The stripped and pied girl then pies one of the other two, she doesn't notice who did it, and assumes it was the other, still fully clothed girl.
She then pies her, and the two girls rip off each others clothes, while pieing each other. Third girl joins in, all three end up just in heels and loads of mess!
Nice! Here is a variation on that idea. Three clean girls. Karly pies Pisces, Pisces assumes it was Erica and pies her in return. This leads to them ripping off each other's clothes. Karly is enjoying this bc she is still clean AND plans to stay that way. She is horrified when they turn the tables on her.
I like very much the school idea. The idea of leaving them in panties in front of the class is very good. I'd add silly girlie printed cotton white panties, and the other girl mocking her for that.
Furthermore, I'd add one of the girls carrying a pie to pie the other, then slipping and falling face first in it. As she stands up, the other asks how is she. Then, she wipes her eyes, looks to the camera and spits out pie and says "never been better, thanks..."
Hope you like my ideas!!
Best regards!!
Furthermore, I'd add one of the girls carrying a pie to pie the other, then slipping and falling face first in it. As she stands up, the other asks how is she. Then, she wipes her eyes, looks to the camera and spits out pie and says "never been better, thanks..."
Hope you like my ideas!!
Best regards!!
moho said: I like very much the school idea. The idea of leaving them in panties in front of the class is very good. I'd add silly girlie printed cotton white panties, and the other girl mocking her for that.
Furthermore, I'd add one of the girls carrying a pie to pie the other, then slipping and falling face first in it. As she stands up, the other asks how is she. Then, she wipes her eyes, looks to the camera and spits out pie and says "never been better, thanks..."
Hope you like my ideas!!
Best regards!!
Furthermore, I'd add one of the girls carrying a pie to pie the other, then slipping and falling face first in it. As she stands up, the other asks how is she. Then, she wipes her eyes, looks to the camera and spits out pie and says "never been better, thanks..."
Hope you like my ideas!!
Best regards!!
You and your spit out!
I am a big fan of sexy office atire: a businessy blouse paired with short skirt, hose and heels.
One of the girls is the bitchy boss talking about a luncheon for an important client (represented by another one of the girls) The third girl is the secretary being bossed around by both of them.
An argument ensues over what should be served for desert, with the pastry table conveniently right there. The secretary ahs finally had enough and says something like "Im not being paid enough for this abuse" and she nails first the boss, and when the client fiends this hilarious, she receives the next pie. Somehow the tables are turned so that our heroine finally takes a pie and then the clothes ripping starts. Maybe one or more could be wearing an old skool stockings/garterbelt getup underneath her skirt suit.
Youre welcome. I will buy this video if its made.
One of the girls is the bitchy boss talking about a luncheon for an important client (represented by another one of the girls) The third girl is the secretary being bossed around by both of them.
An argument ensues over what should be served for desert, with the pastry table conveniently right there. The secretary ahs finally had enough and says something like "Im not being paid enough for this abuse" and she nails first the boss, and when the client fiends this hilarious, she receives the next pie. Somehow the tables are turned so that our heroine finally takes a pie and then the clothes ripping starts. Maybe one or more could be wearing an old skool stockings/garterbelt getup underneath her skirt suit.
Youre welcome. I will buy this video if its made.
fredsout said: I am a big fan of sexy office atire: a businessy blouse paired with short skirt, hose and heels.
One of the girls is the bitchy boss talking about a luncheon for an important client (represented by another one of the girls) The third girl is the secretary being bossed around by both of them.
An argument ensues over what should be served for desert, with the pastry table conveniently right there. The secretary ahs finally had enough and says something like "Im not being paid enough for this abuse" and she nails first the boss, and when the client fiends this hilarious, she receives the next pie. Somehow the tables are turned so that our heroine finally takes a pie and then the clothes ripping starts. Maybe one or more could be wearing an old skool stockings/garterbelt getup underneath her skirt suit.
Youre welcome. I will buy this video if its made.
One of the girls is the bitchy boss talking about a luncheon for an important client (represented by another one of the girls) The third girl is the secretary being bossed around by both of them.
An argument ensues over what should be served for desert, with the pastry table conveniently right there. The secretary ahs finally had enough and says something like "Im not being paid enough for this abuse" and she nails first the boss, and when the client fiends this hilarious, she receives the next pie. Somehow the tables are turned so that our heroine finally takes a pie and then the clothes ripping starts. Maybe one or more could be wearing an old skool stockings/garterbelt getup underneath her skirt suit.
Youre welcome. I will buy this video if its made.
Interestingly, Fred, most of the ideas in my mind are quite similar to this idea. It is important that all 3 women have a different role, as opposed to say, a boss and 2 helpers. It adds to the "story" to have say, a boss, helper and client. And I usually like the boss character to be more dominant and the assistant characters to be more submissive/ditzy.
The most recent idea I had was to have the assistant come to the boss holding a plain hamburger (that she requested). She asks the assistant where the fries are. The assistant takes her into the next room which has a table of pies. The boss says, "I said FRIES, not PIES!" She then complains about the burger being plain. The assistant gets some ketchup and tries to squirt it on the burger, but gets it on the boss' dress. The same thing happens with mustard.
That's as far as I got. The ruined dress, bitchy attitude, ditz, and table full of pies will somehow get me where I am going. Then you factor in the third girl somehow to make it more of a "story".
I just wrote my script. I ended up with 2 competing bakers at a bake sale getting interviewed by a reporter. They begin to strip and nail one another with pies as the reporter keeps asking questions. The reporter ends up getting nailed/stripped as well but keeps the interview going. She does not throw any however.
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