Hi all who clicked here. Thank you for the attention. Anyhow...


I'm a slow writer so I've plenty of time to changes as I go about plotting my next part of my The Grand Race variation.
- The first was Zucker Bakery, based upon the name on the pie fight room, Zucker Backerei.
- The second was a Slippery Escape, my pitiful excuse for getting the cast stripped and in slime before Zucker Bakery, as the scene was before it.

My next one is based upon the Interrogation section of the movie. Here is my current plot points I want to reach, of course with a bit/lot of XXX WAM thrown in:

1: Dubois is captured with Hestia and Fate.
2: Leslie is being "tortured" by the guards in a different location.
3: Maxine shows up and saves Leslie. Bless you my son.
4: Baroness takes Fate and with the Princess & Countess there initiates the Prince and Pauper con. (very brief)
5: Baroness and Leslie duel.


I'm skipping over Max's escape and Hezekiah's capture since neither adds much to my plot, and probably Max's car antics as it's not WAM oriented (and even if it was, it'd be to an unnamed cast).

{I've also just cut a step between 4 and 5 where Dubois attempts to escape, since I feel it was unnecessary given my abbreviated plot. However, this could have led to her and Hezekiah's "torture" scene but I think I'll skip it}

Anyhow, please give feedback, suggestions, appreciation and/or hate.
I take it all to the face, like a pie.