I'm creating Five Summer Days, an interactive story about a wet-and-messy summer camp for young adults, full of challenges, punishments, adventures and fun. (https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays)
I'm about to release the day 4 update, and I'm looking for prereaders who would find technical bugs, typos, awkward phrasing and other issues.
Day 4 features: * Two epic challenges, many punishments and many smaller scenes * Whole group activities, but also opportunities to develop individual relationships * Opportunities for optional flirting * Improved technicals (import/export, named save files, font rendering, error recovery)
Length: The new content is about 15,000 words for one playthrough.
If you want to preread: Thank you! Please send me a direct message or make a comment in this thread.
Jouette said: I'm creating Five Summer Days, an interactive story about a wet-and-messy summer camp for young adults, full of challenges, punishments, adventures and fun. (https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays)
I'm about to release the day 4 update, and I'm looking for prereaders who would find technical bugs, typos, awkward phrasing and other issues.
Day 4 features: * Two epic challenges, many punishments and many smaller scenes * Whole group activities, but also opportunities to develop individual relationships * Opportunities for optional flirting * Improved technicals (import/export, named save files, font rendering, error recovery)
Length: The new content is about 15,000 words for one playthrough.
If you want to preread: Thank you! Please send me a direct message or make a comment in this thread.
I have been lucky enough to be given the chance to pre-read and this is amazing and well worth reading! The quality is astonishing and the story touching and sexy!
Thank you to all prereaders. With your help, we managed to clear two important progression-breaking bug and a number of typos.
The story is now public at https://jouette.neocities.org/fivedays/ but if any of you find any issues still, send them over and I'll include them in a patch.
Love you, too
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